Cool pal I dig your character lineup...the robot is nicely executed and I find the last one more unique. The environment is interesting but I feel the flow of the composition as a whole makes it difficult to take in. It may read more clearly if the middle wasn't so open, building was more in frame, or sky was much lighter? Just some thoughts, good stuff :)(fixed typos)
yeah....i shoulve mentioned that these are not done...any of them. just things i tinker with after work.The building out of frame was on purpose at the time and theres going to be more dragon creatures and elements that i sketched out and then removed for just a preview to post. Thought i may recrop but i kindof like the structure to not be fully revealed...Ill keep your suggestions in mind though
Oh no worries - sometimes things out of the frame is very awesome (to heighten just how tall it is?), but perhaps in this case that, combined with how high it sits in the frame, makes it feel a bit distracting. Though lets not make every composition standard either, I hear ya ;)
some solid sketches man...nice mech design.
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